Last time I tried to set out how my initial negative response to this late James novel turned much more positive as I started rereading it. Here I’d like to take a closer look at some early passages in the text to try to show the kinds of qualities that changed my mind.
Just a few pages into Book 1 of The Ambassadors Strether has landed in England before setting off for Paris on his mission to bring back Chad, the errant son of his fiancée Mrs Newsome, because he’s assumed to be embroiled in a sordid affair with a bad woman. In a hotel in Chester, near Liverpool, where he is to meet his countryman, the staid lawyer Waymarsh, he encounters Maria Gostrey, an American woman of about 35 who tells him she heard him ask at the hotel for Waymarsh, and that he is a mutual acquaintance. They arrange to meet in the hotel garden.
When he walks towards her when they meet there later, Strether assesses her appearance: she looks to him ‘almost insolently young’ (he’s 55). Her eyes
had taken hold of him straight away…measuring him up and down as if they knew how…Their possessor was in truth, it may be communicated, the mistress of a hundred cases or categories, receptacles of the mind, subdivisions for convenience, in which, from a full experience, she pigeon-holed her fellow mortals with a hand as free as that of a compositor scattering type. She was as equipped in this particular as Strether was the reverse, and it made an opposition between them which he might well have shrunk from submitting to if he had fully suspected it [but of course he doesn’t! Penguin edition (from which all of my quotations will be taken) p. 60; all ellipses hereafter are mine.]
There’s so much going on in that passage. At the beginning of this long novel about seeing, perceiving and discriminating, with varying degrees of insight and success – and Stether is largely not gifted in this area – James sets out how shrewdly perceptive Miss Gostrey is, while Strether not only isn’t, but doesn’t even suspect it, or recognise it in others. This is brought out from the start of my quotation as James emphasises how adeptly her eyes take his measure, assess and categorise him, sifting through the ‘types’ she’s encountered in her experience. Even though Strether is 20 years older, the implication is that he’s nowhere near as sharp an observer of people as she is.
That image of the compositor ‘scattering type’ was what arrested my attention initially. James’s imagery in this novel is often as vivid and unusual as this, and it’s something I intend to return to. Here I think it adds a shade of irony in Miss Gostrey’s appraisal of him: there’s something a little, I don’t know, mechanical about her assessing of Strether here. Yes, she’s a much more perceptive observer than him, but there’s something a bit chilling about her systematic scrutiny and ‘pigeon-holing’ of him.
Here also James sets out from the start of the novel how lacking in analytical capacity Strether is; he’s the ‘reverse’ of her in terms of perception, and he doesn’t even ‘suspect’ that this ‘opposition’ between them should perhaps have given him pause (‘might well have shrunk from submitting to’ if he had). The portrayal of Strether then here is critical, it emphasises his shortcomings – and doesn’t bode well for the mission he’s on (to determine whether Chad Newsome has gone to the bad in Paris) – but it’s also sympathetic, I feel; his cluelessness is endearing, unworldly (whereas Maria’s sharp eyes are slightly scary, her free-handed pigeon-holing just a touch heartless).
The sentence structure in this passage is, I’d say, about low-to-medium in the scale of complexity in the novel as a whole. As I said last time, there were whole pages where at the end of them I had little idea what had been expressed. The reader, as Leavis complained, has to work hard to understand; he describes the late novels as ‘alembicated’ specimens – a splendid word I had to look up: it means ‘over-refined, excessively subtle, precious’, and I wouldn’t entirely disagree with this assessment of James’s late style. But unlike Leavis, I think the effort demanded of the reader to make sense of these elaborately qualified and hedged sentences is worth the rewards accruing.
A few pages later we see another example of Strether’s character that will become increasingly apparent in the novel: his inability to ‘enjoy’ his life experience, to ‘live’, in fact. He and Maria are walking the ancient city walls of Chester, and he’s postponed arranging to meet up with Waymarsh to do so. She notices him repeatedly looking at his watch:
“You’re doing something that you think not right.”
It so touched the place that he quite changed colour and his laugh grew almost awkward. “Am I enjoying it as much as that?”
“You’re not enjoying it, I think, so much as you ought.”
“I see” – he appeared thoughtfully to agree. Great is my privilege.”
“Oh it’s not your privilege! It has nothing to do with me. It has to do with yourself. Your failure’s general.”
“Ah there you are!” he laughed. “It’s the failure of Woollett [his home town in New England]. That’s general.” [p. 64]
Miss Gostrey’s analysis of him here is again perceptive and accurate, but although James shows it with some sympathetic irony – she seems to be urging him to allow himself to enjoy an experience, to relax into it – there’s also a whiff of sharpness in it once more.
Stether’s reaction is initially to blush because she’s perceived what’s going on in his mind: his sense of guilt. This embarrassed reaction is something we’ll see in him repeatedly as he deals with the more sophisticated and worldly set of Chad Newsome in Paris. He’s out of his depth in this mission. And again I feel we don’t dislike or disparage him for his failings; he’s just a flawed, floundering human being – like the rest of most of us, as Betsy said in a comment on my previous post on this novel.
His awkward, slightly apologetic excuse, that his inability to enjoy is due to his Woollett upbringing – that of a puritanical, commerce-fixated and narrow-minded social circle dominated by Mrs Newsome – is both naïve and evasive, and we surely feel more for him here than we smile at Miss Gostrey’s abrasive challenging him. His blush is at least natural, unlike her singling out his ‘failure’.
Strether goes on, trying to dig himself out of the hole he’s in:
“Woollett isn’t sure it ought to enjoy. If it were it would. But it hasn’t, poor thing,” Stether continued, “any one to show it how. It’s not like me. I have somebody.”
They pause, and Miss Gostrey ponders these words, ‘full of an air, to which she more and more justified her right, of understanding the effect of things.’ She agrees with him, and wishes he would let her ‘show [him] how’. His reply is charming: “Oh I’m afraid of you!” This is one of his better qualities, even though it’s displayed here with some irony on his part. He can be disingenuously honest about his deficiencies when it comes to human interaction. He’s not completely hopeless.
She laughingly disagrees with him – otherwise they wouldn’t so quickly have fallen into each other’s company as they have. He must, she concludes, trust her.
“I think I do! – but that’s exactly what I’m afraid of. I shouldn’t mind if I didn’t. It’s falling thus in twenty minutes so utterly into your hands. I dare say,” Strether continued, “it’s a sort of thing you’re thoroughly familiar with; but nothing more extraordinary has ever happened to me.”
Despite the semi-colon in that bit of dialogue – a structure usually seen as something to be avoided in prose fiction – works to humorous effect here. Strether has enough gumption to point out to his companion’s teasing that his lack of sophisticated confidence disconcerts him, and his confession highlights the difference between them to his advantage, strangely. This exchange also further develops the lightly comic but subtle dynamic in this developing relationship. Are they flirting? If so, who is setting the pace? How can Strether succeed on his mission with Chad if he’s so easily wrong-footed by a much younger person? We realise, surely, that he’s doomed to failure, and we feel for him. His rueful acknowledgement that he falls far short of her in terms of social poise, self-confidence and perception redeems him.
There I’d better stop. I’ve only reached a few pages into the narrative, and I have so many more examples I plan to explore that demonstrate, I hope, why I disagree with so many commentators’ criticism of this novel. Its linguistic complexity is an essential part of its overall effect; I can’t think of another writer who can convey so much, with such subtlety, delicacy and wit, in passages of this kind. It’s amazing to think that James didn’t physically write this prose: he dictated it to his secretary.